Brave’s New World
May 10, 2009
The history has past from calling you brother
Today you look beyond the time of the setting rays
And walk much closer to the window of the newest century
Not always so – willing to look so forward
There were only the memories of winters behind
The smell of spring in the first thaw
Time’s meaning had a greater meaning then
You watched the herds for signs of movement
You listened closer to the wind’s words
Voices today all melt together carrying no song
The sun still sets on the western horizon
The wolf once more seeks shelter beneath the snow
In your face I read the turmoil of worlds
You glance at the window hungry to pass
This gap of era’s linked only by Wikipedia’s portal
Your youth still finds favor in resumes
The choice of destiny stands impatiently bookmarked
You must let the call die quickly –
Or accept communion with the Greater Spirits
bkmackenzie
copyrighted 2009


May 10, 2009 at 7:43 pm
Comments Welcome
May 11, 2009 at 7:17 am
your words have a soft sadness in them – these linger for me: “In your face I read the turmoil of worlds” – what we have done to our brothers across time….
May 11, 2009 at 9:53 am
thank you yvette, I believe we all face that turmoil – our communion with nature has been set aside – and settlement made for a cubicle and computer – nature has so much to teach us about our Creator and ourselves.
blessings
May 12, 2009 at 5:30 pm
So powerful! It makes me want to cry, though the poem is very beautiful. The ending is right on. I absolutely LOVE this stanza:
“Time’s meaning had a greater meaning then
You watched the herds for signs of movement
You listened closer to the wind’s words”.
Listened closer to the wind’s words!!! Beautiful. There’s too much noise in society and not enough time spent listening to those words in the wind. I love that. I’m going to take a walk in the woods now:)
May 12, 2009 at 6:33 pm
Thank you Julie, and I am glad you are going out to listen to the wind speak – have a wonderful evening —
May 14, 2009 at 10:46 am
“Voices today all melt together carrying no song” Sister, you speak the truth.
May 14, 2009 at 9:06 pm
wow – really struck by “Voices today all melt together carrying no song” – we have more of everything than ever, and we have never been more empty. this is a fantastic, thoughtful piece.
May 14, 2009 at 9:25 pm
Thank you Jon and joaquin for you wonderful comments – In our culture today we do a lot of talking just for the noise, listening to nature is something our busy life seems to have no time for, yet this is our true nature.
Thank you both for taking the time to stop in and comment -
blessings