Brave’s New World

May 10, 2009

 

The history has past from calling you brother

Today you look beyond the time of the setting rays

And walk much closer to the window of the newest century

 

Not always so – willing to look so forward

There were only the memories of winters behind

The smell of spring in the first thaw

 

Time’s meaning had a greater meaning then

You watched the herds for signs of movement

You listened closer to the wind’s words

 

Voices today all melt together carrying no song

The sun still sets on the western horizon

The wolf once more seeks shelter beneath the snow

 

In your face I read the turmoil of worlds

You glance at the window hungry to pass

This gap of era’s linked only by Wikipedia’s portal

 

Your youth still finds favor in resumes

The choice of destiny stands impatiently bookmarked

You must let the call die quickly –

 

Or accept communion with the Greater Spirits

 

bkmackenzie

copyrighted 2009

8 Responses to “Brave’s New World”

  1. soulintention Says:

    Comments Welcome

  2. Sojourner Says:

    your words have a soft sadness in them – these linger for me: “In your face I read the turmoil of worlds” – what we have done to our brothers across time….

  3. soulintention Says:

    thank you yvette, I believe we all face that turmoil – our communion with nature has been set aside – and settlement made for a cubicle and computer – nature has so much to teach us about our Creator and ourselves.

    blessings

  4. Julie Says:

    So powerful! It makes me want to cry, though the poem is very beautiful. The ending is right on. I absolutely LOVE this stanza:

    “Time’s meaning had a greater meaning then
    You watched the herds for signs of movement
    You listened closer to the wind’s words”.

    Listened closer to the wind’s words!!! Beautiful. There’s too much noise in society and not enough time spent listening to those words in the wind. I love that. I’m going to take a walk in the woods now:)

  5. soulintention Says:

    Thank you Julie, and I am glad you are going out to listen to the wind speak – have a wonderful evening —

  6. JonBonJovi Says:

    “Voices today all melt together carrying no song” Sister, you speak the truth.

  7. joaquin Says:

    wow – really struck by “Voices today all melt together carrying no song” – we have more of everything than ever, and we have never been more empty. this is a fantastic, thoughtful piece.

  8. soulintention Says:

    Thank you Jon and joaquin for you wonderful comments – In our culture today we do a lot of talking just for the noise, listening to nature is something our busy life seems to have no time for, yet this is our true nature.

    Thank you both for taking the time to stop in and comment -

    blessings

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