a visitation of cloth draped about you; a pearl
to link the lady therein –
a weave of highlands revisited,
more than just name can give –
amid water of memory cast shallow,
long shadows promise
of virtue filled –
beauty concealing a thread
of unwritten …
word you hold in concord -
presented by course of the highlands,
the hound stands in
watch of a maid,
draped in a weave; a the cloth worthy
of life in binding cause -
be it the tartan revealing
my namesake; your heart entwined
that I succumb -
to the bearing, my lass,
my lady, I bow to
the highlands in
pause
bkmackenzie
copyrighted 2008
June 12, 2009 at 4:20 pm
Comments welcome
June 13, 2009 at 5:27 pm
Okay, if you went to Scotland, I am SO jealous! LOL! Just kidding. Actually, I would love to go to Scotland, but your poem has taken me there. So thank you for that!
I was going to say the first verse is my favorite, but each one is full of gems. But I do love the pearl, the lady, and the “weave of highlands.” And the next line, “more than just name can give” is beautiful and so true. It’s so good to have you back!
June 14, 2009 at 1:46 pm
Julie, No I did not go to Scotland, but will be going next summer. My husband is a Canadian Scot and there is a large gathering of the MacKenzie in Scotland next year so we plan on going. I love the Scotish heritage and the games – go every year to hear the pipes and see the tartans. So I am looking forward to our trip.
I needed a break – spent some time with my children and just enjoyed. Thank you for the welcome back.
June 16, 2009 at 8:41 pm
Good to have you back. I hope your break was just what you needed.
What a lovely poem. I visited Scotland several years ago and images of the Highlands coursed through my mind as I read. You truly are a skillful word weaver.
I could almost see a tapestry in creation when I read:
“the hound stands in
watch of a maid,
draped in a weave; a the cloth worthy
of life in binding cause -”
I would like to wear such a garment one day.
June 17, 2009 at 9:37 pm
Thank you Karen, I love the Scottish tradtions and the tartans – what a beautiful tradtion – I am looking forward to going next summer.
June 17, 2009 at 10:18 pm
welcome back… I too like the weaving of the Highlands in this, the woman and the pearl. nostalgic.
June 24, 2009 at 1:15 pm
A very gently flowing poem that captured my heart from the beginning with these words:
“a visitation of cloth draped about you; a pearl
to link the lady therein”
As always, the lovely picture added more depth for my thought.
June 24, 2009 at 1:16 pm
PS so glad your back!
July 6, 2009 at 5:27 pm
this is breathtakingly beautiful – timeless – and wonderfully layered.
July 6, 2009 at 8:08 pm
Joaquin,
Thank you so much for your comments – you made my day without knowing it. I have not written or felt like writing in over and month and you comment has been a needed inspiration.
blessings
barbara
July 6, 2009 at 8:09 pm
soujouner,
thank you so much for your beautiful comments.
blessings
July 7, 2009 at 12:26 pm
I hope you are inspired again soon… you inspire me to write.. thinking of you! cindy
July 18, 2009 at 4:32 am
so very nice to see you back….