I fell into an inkwell
When I was barely three
I happened to be bouncing on my Nana’s knee
Bouncing, bouncing, bouncing
When she let go of me
My goodness I went flying
Up, up into the air –
Nana called to mother and they went
Scrambling everywhere
I fell into an inkwell
As downward I did turn
The hole right before me- my heart began to churn
Churning, churning, churning
What a lesson I would learn
Down into the inkwell
From up high above I went
And there within that inkwell
Many hours would soon be spent
I fell into an inkwell
I could barely swim
So I floated to the bottle’s edge searching for the rim
Searching, searching, searching
For that opening I fell in
Calling for my Nana
Seemed to be of no accord
When before me swam a manatee
Appearing rather bored
There within the inkwell
I began to look around
To my chagrin I saw so many odd characters to be found
Many, many, many
Characters all around
An old man on a boat
A fat baby on a swing
An elephant and kangaroo
Oh’ what opera they could sing
I dove down in the inkwell
To see what I could see
I saw a pirate and a maiden sitting down to English tea
Sitting, sitting, sitting
How quaint it appeared to be
Above I heard a thunder
It was my Nana’s voice
“Hold on” she cried below
“Downward a ladder I will hoist”
I fell into an inkwell
The story it is true
Rescued just by Nana’s timing before my little life was through
Timing, timing, timing
Of the ladder Nana threw
Out from the inkwell
Well I did find my way
But the many friends I made there
in “ink” we still corresponded today …….
bkmackenzie
copyrighted 2008
soulintention said:
comments welcome–
susan said:
Lovely, enchanted story. Like the repetition and rhythm here. Thanks for the read. Glad you chose to share with us for Little Lovin’ Monday.
soulintention said:
thank you susan,
i am so glad you enjoyed it –thanks too for stopping by –
you have a wonderful site —
barbara
S.L. Corsua said:
I feel like a child hop-hop-hopping my way to which ever way again. 😉 By the way, I just thought I’d share, a link to Scott Ennis’ collection of children’s sonnets, here: http://childrens.sonnetwriters.com/
The two of you write poem-portals to precious childhood memories. Thank you.
soulintention said:
thank you so much S.L. for your comments –and for the info on the children’s sonnet site — i will certainly check it out.
your comments are always appreciated —
barbara
gentledove said:
That is nicely done, nicely, nicely, nicely, I reckon it could be developed into a story.
soulintention said:
gentledove, yes I it is a story in promise – I am hoping to come upon an illustrator and bring some of my stories to life —
thank you for your kind comments –
gentledove said:
Soul if you go to settings-users-profile, fill out the URL parts then when people click on to your name and avatar they get straight to your bloggy-gonna blogroll ya
soulintention said:
thanks gentledove – I think I got it on the URL — also thanks for blogrolly me — I will do the same —
cheers
Julie said:
Beautiful words! Yes, a lovely rhythm. I saw you at S.L. Corsua’s site, “Unguarded Utterance.” It’s very nice to meet you and read your work. Great job.
soulintention said:
thank you Julie for your lovely comments and for stopping by soulintention. it is nice to meet you also, I will check out your site — there are so many great sites here i am glad you chose to drop in mine. hope to be hearing from you again — have a great day —
barbara
joaquin carvel said:
i love this; a beautiful song of rememberance and reflection, rich and rythmic, soulful, brilliantly told. you have brightened my day.
soulintention said:
thank you joaquin for your wonderful comments and for stopping by soulintention — i am happy to have brightened your day — hope to talk to you again soon —
barbara
Annamari said:
this is marvelously magic (Alice in Wonderland magic)
soulintention said:
thank you Annamari – i am glad you had a good time with this tale — thank you also for stopping by and taking the time to read – hope to hear from you again — have a great day
barbara
Annette said:
It’s a fun story and has great rythm. Love how you have used repetition – the poem is practically singing itself.
soulintention said:
Annette,
Thank you so much for stopping by Soul Intention — your comments are always welcome and appeciated — have a great day —
barbara